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| Entry tags: | harry potter, harry/draco |
HD_worldcup Reveal!
Well,
hd_worldcup has come to a close and the Big Reveal went up last night. It was a lot of fun, although I don't know if I'll be volunteering to be Team Captain again any time soon, and had some great fics posted. Check out
gossymer's Sortable Masterlist.
My own fic, Companions in the Dark, got some good comments, which I'm happy about, but also some iffy ones. Mainly concerning length and what I didn't include. Unfortunately, I had less than 2 weeks to write because I was an alternate, and it takes me a while to write anything because I obsess over every word ^^; I focused on the prompt, which was the Death Tarot Card, pretty much exclusively, so all of the scenes revolve around it. I'm posting it here now- please let me know if you enjoy it. I may pick up the story again and tell it more from Severus' perspective, and then more from Harry's, and kind of stitch it together that way. And then maybe continue it... I haven't decided yet. It pretty much depends on whether or not I get the job I'm going in for an interview for next week :)
Title: Companions in the Dark
Author:
yura_slash
Team: Fanon
Prompt: Death
Wordcount: 4,366
Rating: R
Warnings: vampiric bloodlust, minor character death (of an OMC) implied
Summary: Severus sends Draco to the only place that he can be safe.
Author’s Note: The Death card portends the destruction of a harmful attitude or belief, which is followed by renewal. I explored this meaning with the support of my Team and beta, Jamie.
Companions in the Dark
“Don’t be stupid. You cannot stay here.”
Draco, though he struggled to appear strong and unaffected, was shaking slightly, like a dead leaf still attached to its stem by the slightest of fibers, and did not answer.
Severus tried not to be impatient with him. “Draco, snap out of it!” His harsh tones drew Draco’s attention to his face, and then to his hands, when he thrust a black, velvet bag towards him. “Here, take this and be gone. Hopefully, it will be enough.”
The bag’s drawstring was drawn tightly closed, but Draco knew what the bag held, and he put it in his cloak pocket carefully before swaying forward onto the balls of his feet. “Thank you –” It was a ghost of a whisper, but Severus heard it all the same. “Severus, I . . . I can’t . . . you . . .” He reached out slightly towards his Godfather’s imposing figure, pale hands trembling.
Severus took pity on him, and drew him into a hug. They had not done this since Draco was a boy, too young to understand what was considered courteous, proper behavior. “I will be fine. You, on the other hand, have many trials ahead of you.”
“But father –”
“Will not act. I know you hold him in great esteem, but he will not act if the Dark Lord does not allow it.”
A sound of distress escaped Draco, his cold face pressed hard against Severus’ chest, and then he pushed the taller man away and turned, the better to conceal the emotions roiling inside him. “I understand.”
“Will you go now? I’ve given you the address, and –”
“Yes. I’ll be fine. You needed . . .” Here he ripped out a few hairs, face impassive, and pushed them into Severus’ nearest hand without meeting his eyes.
Severus held the fine, white-blond strands tightly. “Goodbye, Draco, and good luck.”